Today is my brother is birthday

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Jun 5, 2017 17:10
Today is my brother is birthday
Today is my brother is birthday. But he is recently really busy at work. Because the meiyu front which brought heavy rain, his workload is getting heavier. He did not take any break on last weekend. Also, he has no time to come home to celebrate his birthday. What we can do is send our wishes to him through LINE or email. We decide to postpone celebrating his birthday on this Saturday. I would send my best wishes to him. I wish he will be always healthy and happy.
今天是我哥哥的生日
但是他最近工作非常忙碌。因為梅雨鋒面的關係，他工作量變得很大，上個週末完全沒有休息。而且今天也沒辦法回家跟我們一起慶生。我們能做的就是用LINE或是電郵傳遞我們地祝福。我們打算延後慶祝他的生日。
我要送給他最好的祝福，希望他能夠永遠健康快樂!
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AT
Jun 5, 2017 18:01
  • Today is my brother is birthday

  • Today is my brother's birthday

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Today is my brother is birthday.

  • Today is my brother's birthday.

 
  • But he is recently really busy at work.

  • But he has been really busy at work lately.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Because the meiyu front which brought heavy rain, his workload is getting heavier.

  • Due to the Meiyu front which brought heavy rain, his workload is getting heavier.

 
  • He did not take any break on last weekend.

  • He did not take a break on last weekend.

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  • Also, he has no time to come home to celebrate his birthday.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • What we can do is send our wishes to him through LINE or email.

  • All we can do is send our wishes to him through LINE or email.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • We decide to postpone celebrating his birthday on this Saturday.

  • We have decided to postpone celebrating his birthday on this Saturday.

 
  • I would send my best wishes to him.

  • I will send my best wishes to him.

    or: I will send him my best wishes.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I wish he will be always healthy and happy.

  • I wish him health and happiness always.

1 people think this correction is good.  
Thank you for your correction!

 
Jun 6, 2017 17:20 :D
  • (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))♪Thank you so much for teaching me~~
臭豆腐
Jun 5, 2017 21:30
  • Because the meiyu front which brought heavy rain, his workload is getting heavier.

  • Because of the meiyu front which brought heavy rain, his workload is getting heavier.

 
  • We decide to postpone celebrating his birthday on this Saturday.

  • We decided to postpone celebrating his birthday on this (past) Saturday.

    If you mean "我們在6月3日那天決定延後慶祝他的生日," then use the correction above.

    But if you mean "我們打算延後慶祝他的生日，延後到6月10日," then say, "We decided to postpone celebrating his birthday until this (coming) Saturday."

 
  • I wish he will be always healthy and happy.

  • I wishope he will be always be healthy and happy.

    AT's correction is also good.

 

Here's an explanation of hope vs. wish:
http://blog.esllibrary.com/2014/06/19/hope-vs-wish/

Thank you for your correction!

 
Jun 6, 2017 17:21 :D
  • (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))♪Thank you so much for teaching me~~
    謝謝您的分享~ 我總搞不清楚!:P
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