I went to golf Last Saturday.

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May 28, 2012 15:50
It took 5 hours to go golf field by car.

I played golf with my coworker , customer, etc.
It's called 接待ゴルフ, entertaiment golf

I win golf tournament among 8 people.
My socre is out 47- in 45.

The wheather is excellent.
It's good be true to play day.


that's it.
May 28, 2012 16:11
  • I went to golf Last Saturday.

  • I played golf last Saturday.

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  • It took 5 hours to go golf field by car.

  • It took 5 hours to get to the golf field by car. -OR- It was a 5-hour drive to the golf field.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I played golf with my coworker , customer, etc.

  • I played golf with one of my coworkers, a customer and a few others.

 
  • It's called 接待ゴルフ, entertaiment golf

  • It's called 接待ゴルフ, or Entertaiment Golf.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I win golf tournament among 8 people.

  • I won a golf tournament against 7 others.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • My socre is out 47- in 45.

  • My score is out 47- in 45. (?)

    I've never played golf, so I'm not sure how to say what score you got. :(

 
  • The wheather is excellent.

  • The weather was excellent.

 
  • It's good be true to play day.

  • It was a perfect day to play golf.

    "Too good to be true" is usually used to express wonder and disbelief. For example:
    "This sale is just too good to be true, it must be a scam, right?"

 

May 28, 2012 16:27 KENJI
ありがとうございました。なるほどそういった使い方なのですね。勉強になりました。
akemi
May 28, 2012 17:31
  • I went to golf Last Saturday.

  • I went to play golf last Saturday.

    Captain Slow's correction is also good.

 
  • It took 5 hours to go golf field by car.

  • It took 5 hours to drive to the golf field.

 
  • I played golf with my coworker , customer, etc.

  • I played golf with my coworkers, customers, etc.

    I don't know whether my correction or Captain Slow's correction is correct; it depends on your meaning. If you only had one coworker, you should use Captain Slow's correction. If you played golf with more than one coworker, use mine. ^^

 
  • My socre is out 47- in 45.

  • My score was out 47- in 45.

1 people think this correction is good.  

I'm glad you had fun :D
Personally I'm terrible at golf -0-;

May 28, 2012 17:39 KENJI
ありがとうございます。ゴルフは難しいですね。(´・ω・｀)
Aussie
May 29, 2012 05:59
  • I went to golf Last Saturday.

  • I went golfing last Saturday.

 

ゴルフは楽しいです！

May 29, 2012 09:44 KENJI
ゴルフは楽しいけど、難しいですね。練習が大変です。(´・ω・｀)
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