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Nov 21st 2010 21:44
Today, I rode my bicycle about 150 km. The event left me completely exhausted −−my strength drained. So I can not write my story about the Halloween party.
I don't mean to be playing with your expectations with a cliffhanger, such as 24. It's not intentional. I'm so sorry.　

I will do my best to solve this problem. Thank you for your patience.:)
maplejac
Thank you for your correction!
Nov 22nd 2010 01:14
  • Today, I rode my bicycle about 150km.

  • Today, I rode my bicycle about 150 km.

 
  • The event left me completely exhausted, −−my strength drained.

  • The event left me completely exhausted, −−my strength drained.

 
  • I don't mean to be playing with your expectations like a cliffhanger, such as 24.

  • I don't mean to be playing with your expectations with a cliffhanger, such as 24.

 
Wow, that's a long bike ride! Don't worry about it being late. :)
SUZUME
Nov 22nd 2010 08:58
Thank you very much for correcting my diary. I have to learn the usage of the marks, such as (--), (,), (“　”), etc. I used them so loosely.

By the way, how's your family's cat Cobra-chan? :)
Nov 23rd 2010 10:34
Nice job on the bike ride!!!
That takes endurance~
apoliglota
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 01st 2012 12:01
  • Today, I rode my bicycle about 150 km.

  • Today, I rode my bicycle about 150 km.

 
  • The event left me completely exhausted −−my strength drained.

  • The event left me completely exhausted, my strength drained, and so I can't write the next entry in my story about the Halloween party.

 
  • I don't mean to be playing with your expectations with a cliffhanger, such as 24.

  • I don't mean to be keeping you hanging.

    What is 24....

 
  • I will do my best to solve this problem.

  • I will do my best to get to it soon.

    It isn't really a problem.

 
I think I will do my best to get to it soon is another convenient phrase.
Jul 01st 2012 13:40 SUZUME
Thank you as always.
Later,I will read over it carefully.Just a quick note to say thank you fot your help.
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