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Rex
  • Darcy, a gentle man who is handsome and wealthy and well-educated.
  • Darcy is a gentleman. He is handsome, wealthy and well-educated.
  • Avoid using 2 x 'and' in one sentence.

Feb 19, 2014 12:15 Public Pride and Prejudice
Rex
  • She loves reading and has her opinion when talking about something.
  • She loves reading and holds strong opinions which she expresses in conversation. She loves reading and holds strong opinions on many subjects.
有主见:hold strong opinion on many subjects

Feb 19, 2014 12:15 Public Pride and Prejudice
Rex
  • Darcy kisses Elizabeth Bennet in the country with morning fog around at sunrise.
  • Darcy kisses Elizabeth Bennet at sunrise in the English countryside surrounded by mist.
  • Mist is romantic. Fog is wet and dull. 'In the countryside' is more romantic and English than 'in the country'. Morning and sunrise are a repetition.

Feb 19, 2014 12:14 Public Pride and Prejudice

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