Recently,I always playing the casual games,"Qi Ji Nuan Nuan&qu...

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Oct 25, 2015 23:46
Recently,I always playing the casual games,"Qi Ji Nuan Nuan"is the name of the game.The ways of the operation is sample,just matches the all kind of clothes for Actress,her name is Nuan Nuan.If you match the proper clothes,you will have a "S".
At the very star,I feel the game very interesting,because i can obtain the wonderful clothes.But,when you game`s level become higher,the wonderful clothes is highly to receive.
Futher more,a part of player want to pass,they choose the higher level clothes,and they don`t care the collocations is beautiful or ugly.I feel very disappointed, so the player lost the original intention of playing the game
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My English is poor,Please help me revise,Thanks:)
最近,我在玩一款休闲游戏,名字叫“奇迹暖暖”。它的玩法很简单,就是给游戏女主暖暖搭配各种衣服。如果你搭配得当,你会得到“S”的评价。
一开始,我觉得这个游戏还挺有意思,因为我可以得到各种不错的衣服。但是,当你游戏等级变高时,漂亮的衣服就越来越难得到了。
而且,一些玩家为了过关,只选择等级高的衣服,而不关心搭配是好看的还是丑陋的。我觉得很失望,这样就失去了玩游戏的初衷。
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英文应该写的巨烂吧,没有一点儿语法知识,感觉就是拼单词,里面有些单词还是查了词典的。拜托哪位大神帮我改改,让我更有动力学英语吧!