Unit 1: Assignment "Write a process essay"
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How to start a Twitter
Twitter is a microblogging service; you just send up to 140 characters per one post. It is toao short to pass on messages to someone, but on the other hand, you can give only an important message because of the restriction of the number of characters. The service is totally for free, so you can start a Twitter anytime you want; you just prepare for the online connection and a digital device like a mobile phone or a computer.
The first step in starting a Twitter is creating a Twitter. Visit an official website "twitter.com," and push the Sign-up-for-Twitter button on the bottom. You need your name, e-mail address and password. After creating your Twitter account, you can start a Twitter anytime you want.
The next step is to register the users you want to follow. One of good points on Twitter is that you don't have to tweet yourself. Just follow someon you like. Many famous celebrites have their Twitter account.
For example, my best favorite actor is Alexander Skarsgard, who play a role of Eric Northman on the drama "True Blood." Unfortunately he isn't very popular in Japan, so it is very difficult to get some information about him. Twitter is one of solutions. Usually celebrites announce their publicities through Twitter, so you can easily get them. If you like digital gadgets very much, @lifehackorg may suit you. @lifehackorg is an official account for Lifehack, which is a website for compiling neat information on current life.
Then, you tweet something yourself. The topic is undefined on Twitter. It totally depends on you. If someone is interested in your tweet, you would receive a mention about your tweet. If you compain about a product you bought on Twitter, you would recieve an active support from the maker. This is becoming one of popular marketing methods on the Internet. Companies collect tweets about their reputation over the Internet and analyze them using the text mining method. If they judge a necessarity to support them, they send a message with Twitter.
It is simple to start a Twitter, but it is difficult to use it effectively. Don't be afraid of a new technology. There is no right answer. Twitter is one of information sources on the Internet.
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This essay is a draft. In this assignment, I have to exchange opinions about the essay. Unfortunately, I'm a student and I don't have partners to discuss it. Could you give me some comments acording to the following points? You don't have to answer all the questions. I will use your comments to revise this essay.
1) Is the process described easy to follow? If not, where could it be clear?
2) Are there adequate supporting details for each major step in the process?
3) Are time words used to effectively sequence the process?
4) Would you enjoy trying or doing what the writer has described? Why or why not?
Twitter is a microblogging service; you just send up to 140 characters per one post. It is toao short to pass on messages to someone, but on the other hand, you can give only an important message because of the restriction of the number of characters. The service is totally for free, so you can start a Twitter anytime you want; you just prepare for the online connection and a digital device like a mobile phone or a computer.
The first step in starting a Twitter is creating a Twitter. Visit an official website "twitter.com," and push the Sign-up-for-Twitter button on the bottom. You need your name, e-mail address and password. After creating your Twitter account, you can start a Twitter anytime you want.
The next step is to register the users you want to follow. One of good points on Twitter is that you don't have to tweet yourself. Just follow someon you like. Many famous celebrites have their Twitter account.
For example, my best favorite actor is Alexander Skarsgard, who play a role of Eric Northman on the drama "True Blood." Unfortunately he isn't very popular in Japan, so it is very difficult to get some information about him. Twitter is one of solutions. Usually celebrites announce their publicities through Twitter, so you can easily get them. If you like digital gadgets very much, @lifehackorg may suit you. @lifehackorg is an official account for Lifehack, which is a website for compiling neat information on current life.
Then, you tweet something yourself. The topic is undefined on Twitter. It totally depends on you. If someone is interested in your tweet, you would receive a mention about your tweet. If you compain about a product you bought on Twitter, you would recieve an active support from the maker. This is becoming one of popular marketing methods on the Internet. Companies collect tweets about their reputation over the Internet and analyze them using the text mining method. If they judge a necessarity to support them, they send a message with Twitter.
It is simple to start a Twitter, but it is difficult to use it effectively. Don't be afraid of a new technology. There is no right answer. Twitter is one of information sources on the Internet.
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This essay is a draft. In this assignment, I have to exchange opinions about the essay. Unfortunately, I'm a student and I don't have partners to discuss it. Could you give me some comments acording to the following points? You don't have to answer all the questions. I will use your comments to revise this essay.
1) Is the process described easy to follow? If not, where could it be clear?
2) Are there adequate supporting details for each major step in the process?
3) Are time words used to effectively sequence the process?
4) Would you enjoy trying or doing what the writer has described? Why or why not?

How to start a Twitter account.
Twitter is a microblogging service; you just send up to 140 characters per post.
The character restriction is too short to pass on a full message to someone, but on the other hand, it is perfect for sending a quick status update, or thought.
The service is free, so you can start a Twitter account anytime you want; need an online connection and a digital device like a mobile phone or a computer.
The first step to use Twitter is creating a Twitter account.
Visit the official website "twitter.
After creating your Twitter account, you can start Twitter anytime you want.
Just follow someone you like.
Many famous celebrites have a Twitter account.
For example, my favorite actor is Alexander Skarsgard, who play a role of Eric Northman on the drama "True Blood." Unfortunately he isn't very popular in Japan, so it is very difficult to get information about him.
Twitter is one of my solutions.
If you complain about a product you bought on Twitter, you would recieve an active support request from the company.
Companies collect tweets about their reputation over the Internet and analyze them using data mining.
It is simple to start a Twitter account, but it is difficult to use it effectively.
Example from Wikipedia: Twitter is an online social networking service and microblogging service that enables its users to send and read text-based messages of up to 140 characters, known as "tweets".
> Example from Wikipedia:
I read it before I started to write this essay! ;P
By the way, don't you use text mining? I work for a computer software company, so I am familiar to computer tech words. Text mining is a data mining for texts:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Text_mining
But, it might not be a common word.
Examples: Facebook sells your data.
I got your data from Facebook.
There are companies that mine your Facebook data.
>There are companies that mine your Facebook data.
I got it. By the way, have you ever heard of "big data"?
I'm not sure whether it is katakana English, but it becomes very popular in Japan. The data related to Facebook, Twitter and etc are called "big data." In computer business, how to use such a big data is a big problem.
com," and click the Sign-up-for-Twitter button on the bottom.
You need to put your name, e-mail address and password.
> Do you have it and enjoy tweeting?
Yes, I have one. I enjoy tweeting and getting various information.
There are a lot of people who are studying English, so I talk about how to learn English with them on Twitter.
Twitter is a microblogging service; you just send up each post is limited to 140 characters per one post.
It is toao The posts are too short to pass on messages to someone, but on the other hand, you can might just give only an important messages because of the restriction of the number of characters.
The service is totally for free, so you can start a Twitter account anytime you want; you just prepare for need an the online connection and a digital device, like a mobile phone or a computer.
The first step in starting a Twitter account is creating a Twitter name/handle.
After creating your Twitter account, you can start a Twitter Tweet anytime you want.
I am not on Twitter; but I know that the post on Twitter is called a "Tweet."
Many famous celebrites have their Twitter accounts.
"Celebrities" is plural.
For example, my best favorite actor is Alexander Skarsgard, who plays the a role of Eric Northman on in the drama "True Blood." Unfortunately he isn't very popular in Japan, so it is very difficult to get some information about him.
Twitter is became one of my solutions.
Past action, past tense.
Usually, celebrites announce their publicities schedules through Twitter, so you can easily get them.
"Publicities" is a clever attempt at a word, but it isn't one. I am unsure what you meant, so I guessed "schedules," that is, to follow what they do.
If you compain on Twitter about a product you bought, you would recieve an active might hear from customer support from for the maker.
This is becoming one of a popular marketing methods on the Internet.
If they judge a necessarity it necessary to support them, they send a message with Twitter.
Don't be afraid of a new technology.
Twitter is only one source of information sources on the Internet.
Could you give me some comments according to the following points?
If not, where could it be made more clear?
> I think the process is clear enough
I'm glad to hear that! I was wondering what I should have written about.
Now I finished Unit 1 on my textbook for your help.
I will go further. I am very interested in the next topic too.