New life

I don't miss my family yet, but I do miss my town already.

Commas are almost always used before "but"

My town is a small town and it has a lot of mountains and rivers, flowers, very beautiful sky and stars and also, all of the people are very kind, so we greet with each other even if we're not acquaintances.

"all the" for nouns. For pronouns use "all of" like: "all of them" "all of us" "all of you"

But here, it's crazy for me.

Would be more clear to say something like: "But things seem crazy here."

Since we were all making a long row, so I told him, "please go ahead." but he said nothing.

"so" not needed when you start with "Since" You could also say "We were all making a long row, so I told him"

"but he said nothing" or "he did not reply"

I felt that it is completely different here than where I lived.

I'm living in an apartment on the 4th floor now.

There are 8 rooms on a floor, but it is strange that we don't know who is living in those rooms, even though we're living in the same apartment.

Since my home is separated from other houses, so I never heard sounds like that.

or "My home is separated from other houses, so I never heard sounds like that."

I think they should think about others who are sleeping.

Why do they light so much?

For more clarity: "Why are there so many lights?"

In my town's case, I can't even walk without lights, so when I look up into the sky there are stars that are soooo beautiful.

You could say "there are beautiful stars", but "so" has a strange effect. You could also say "very" instead of "so" like "there are very beautiful stars"

But there is nothing beautiful here.

"here has" doesn't flow well, you could replace it with "this place has" or the name of the city or place. "But this place has nothing beautiful." or "But New York has nothing beautiful."

Just the lights look nice.

On Sunday April 1st, I went to my apartment and started a new life.

I don't miss my family yet, but I already miss my hometown.

My town is a small town with a lot of mountains, rivers and flowers. It has a very beautiful sky and stars and also all of the people are very kind so we greet with each other even if we're not acquaintances.

But here, life seems so crazy to me.

When I was about to get off the train, there was a man who wanted to get off too.

Since there were a lot of people queuing to get out I told him, "please go ahead." but he didn't acknowledge me.

I felt that it's completely different here from where I lived before.

I'm living on the 4th floor of an apartment block.

There are 8 apartments on each floor, but isn't it strange that we don't know the people who are living in the other apartments on the same floor?

And one more thing that is strange for me happens at night.

At night I often hear someone is screaming and crying near my apartment.

Since my home is separated from other houses, so I have never heard sounds like that before.

Why is there so much illumination here?