Please can you look at this Chinese exercise and sentences

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May 16, 2011 07:31
Please can you look at this exercise and sentences Make corrections, comments etc etc.

The English is right, this was just me messing about with how to say similar things different ways in Chinese and practising tense.

Thank you!


我真需要学会使我的生活更有条理。
I really need to learn to make my life more organised.
我真需要学会让我的生活更有条理。
I really need to learn to make my life more organised.
我真需要让我的生活更有条理。
I really need to make my life more organized.
我真需要让我的生活变得更有条理一点。
I really need to make my life a little more organized.
我需要把我的生活变得有条理。
I need to get my life organised.

我的生活成了更有条理。
My life became more organised
我的生活变得更有条理了。
My life is becoming more organised
我的生活变有条理了。
My life is becoming(getting) organised
我的生活变更有条理了。
My life is becoming(getting) more organised


我的生活变得越来越有条理。
My life is becoming more and more organized.
我的生活会变得有条理了。
My life will become organized.
我的生活会变得更有条理。
My life will become more organized
我的生活成了更有条理。
My life became more organized. ( My life is more organised.)
我的生活是有条理!
My life is organized!
我的生活是越来越有条理了。
My life is more and more(becoming)organised.