IELTS Speaking Section Part2 "Memorable Event"

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May 22, 2011 18:30
Describe a memorable event in your life.

you should say

・when the event took place
・where the event took place
・what happend exactly

and explain why this event was memorable for you.

My answer

My most memorable event in my life is short-term English course in Canada.
I took this course in 2001 to improve my English and it was held at University of Toronto.

During the stay in Toronto for three weeks,I spent most time on taking English class on weekdays,and on short trip to neighboring cities such as Otawa in the weekend.

It was very memorable event for me because it was my first time to visit foreign counry and talk with foreigners.Afterwards, I realized how important English is to communicate with foreigners all over the world.The experince broadened my mind to international society.


cranetrain
Thank you for your correction!
May 22, 2011 18:45
  • ・what happend exactly

  • ・what happened exactly

 
  • My most memorable event in my life is short-term English course in Canada.

  • My The most memorable event in my life was a short-term English course in Canada.

 
  • During the stay in Toronto for three weeks,I spent most time on taking English class on weekdays,and on short trip to neighboring cities such as Otawa in the weekend.

  • During the three week stay in Toronto, I spent most of the time in taking English class during the week, and took short trips to neighboring cities such as Otawa on the weekend.

 
  • It was very memorable event for me because it was my first time to visit foreign counry and talk with foreigners.

  • It was a very memorable event for me because it was my first time to visiting a foreign country and talking to foreigners.

 
  • Afterwards, I realized how important English is to communicate with foreigners all over the world.

  • Afterwards, I realized how important English was for communicating with foreigners all over the world.

 
  • The experince broadened my mind to international society.

  • The experience broadened my mind to international society. <-- "international society" just doesn't sound natural. You could say "the world" or "world cultures"

 

May 22, 2011 18:30 U
Thank you so much for your correction!!
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