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Are all of the following sentences correct?

Are all of the following sentences correct? It would be great if anyone could explain the difference in nuance between “about”,”on”,”as ...
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Aug 14, 2018 18:05
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Snow was scattered in nearby seaside park.

Snow was scattered in nearby seaside park. That was grateful gift in terrible hot weather.
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Aug 6, 2017 19:06
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My daughter participated in a local summer festival.

My daughter participated in a local summer festival. That is only their outdoor brass band concert. It is good to be able to listen to t...
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Aug 6, 2017 01:05
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Someone disrupted trains with bomb threat.

Someone disrupted trains with bomb threat. That's annoying. A suspicious cardboard seems to be already removed at the station, bu...
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Jun 6, 2017 22:05
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The book report written by my younger daughter was submitted to a contest and... With native lang

The book report written by my younger daughter was submitted to a contest and received an honorable mention. Also, my older daughter got...
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Dec 26, 2016 23:49
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