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Jul 25, 2010 14:56
Pola bear Goro at the Tennoji zoo got a chunk of ice which has apples. It was on the TV news.

My grand-daughter was watching the news with my family. My son talked to her "Oh look, how happy he is! The ice looks delicious, we could enjoy it too!"

She replied "Oh no, I wouldn't, because I have dental hyperesthesia"

By the way, she is seven.
John Boy
Jul 25, 2010 20:47
  • Pola bear Goro at the Tennoji zoo got a chunk of ice which has apples.

  • Polar bear Goro at the Tennoji zoo got a chunk of ice mixed with which has apples.

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  • My son talked to her "Oh look, how happy he is!

  • My son exclaimed talked to her, "Oh look, how happy he is!" [Better, more ... descriptive.;-) ]

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  • The ice looks delicious, we could enjoy it too!"

  • The ice looks delicious!, We could enjoy it too!"

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Most seven-year-olds are ... hyper! But your g-daughter is wise beyond her years. ;-) Cute little story. Nice. I'm much older than she is, but I can't pronounce the word! lol

Thank you for your correction!
atsu
Jul 25, 2010 23:34

It seems like really cool! I want to that. ^^

ksn
Jul 26, 2010 10:11

It's just like a "Shirokuma" for polar bears!

Vermilion
Jul 26, 2010 10:25

Hi atsu,

It's been super hot, hasn't it? I've been hibernating at my cool room all the time. lol

Hi ksn,

How are you? Yes, yes, I know it's for polar bears. I hope we have some shower later. Have a nice day.

Vermilion
Jul 26, 2010 23:24

John boy,

Thank you for your corrections.

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