I play tag in Shibuya!

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I play tag in Shibuya!

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Oct 02nd 2008 19:55

Last saturday night(24:00-28:00),
I play tag in Shibuya!
Shibuya is one of most popular downtown.

in mixi - maximum SNS in japan,There is Shibuya tag community
I join it. This is the 2nd in this time.

1 round is 1 hour. players is all adults.
this is tag, but this is hide-and-seek too.
in night city, there There are a lot of hidden places.
I hid under stairs among between building and building.

I was quiet in the dark.
I was frightened because of the footstep.

The chaser shone on between the building and the building where I was
hiding myself.
I was further below about the stairs between the building and the
building.
Therefore, I was not found.

There were several-time these kind of things.

However, the chaser has not loosened the hand to our regret.
at 5 minutes from limit time, I waited for the handful.
very mortifying!!

I want to get away next time.

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Oct 03rd 2008 15:53 Mr. Wallet

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Last saturday night(24:00-28:00),
Last Saturday night (24:00-28:00),

I play tag in Shibuya!
I played tag in Shibuya!

Shibuya is one of most popular downtown.
Shibuya is one of most the popular downtown areas.

I join it.
I joined it.

This is the 2nd in this time.
This was my 2nd in this time.

1 round is 1 hour.
Each round was 1 hour.

players is all adults.
The players were all adults.

this is tag, but this is hide-and-seek too.
This was tag, but it was hide-and-seek too.

in night city, there There are a lot of hidden places.
In a city at night, there are a lot of hidden places.

I hid under stairs among between building and building.
I hid under some stairs among between two buildings.

I was frightened because of the footstep.
I was frightened because I heard footsteps.

The chaser shone on between the building and the building where I was
The seeker shone (his/her) flashlight down the alley where I was

I was further below about the stairs between the building and the
I was underneath(?) the stairs between the

building.
buildings.

There were several-time these kind of things.
This kind of thing happened several times.

However, the chaser has not loosened the hand to our regret.
???

at 5 minutes from limit time, I waited for the handful.
???

I did my best, but it was a little confusing.

You made mistakes in tense in the first half.
物語の上半で時制の間違いを作りましたね。

I think it would help with corrections if you also wrote in Japanese.
何時も日本語でも書き込みを書いてばいいだと思います。

Please pardon my poor Japanese. ^_^;

がんばります、raituさん。d(^_^)b