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Sep 23rd 2010 05:01
My father died last April and now I realize that I miss him more.My mother died when I was seven years old then he was the last I had.
We lived far and we had our life but in some way we knew we were together.
Now when I remember that I feel very sad.
We grow up and we realize how important they are.
With this crazy life we have time for anything and there are things we can´t enjoy them.Those things are smallers but the most important.
Aforetime people were no so busy and they had time for doing simple things.
MikeDouglas
Thank you for correction!
Sep 23rd 2010 05:25
  • My father died last April and now I realize that I miss him more.

  • My father died last April and now I realize that I miss him more than ever.

 
  • My mother died when I was seven years old then he was the last I had.

  • My mother died when I was seven years old. then he He was the my last remaining relative I had.

 
  • We lived far and we had our life but in some way we knew we were together.

  • We lived far from each other and we had our own lives life , but in some way somehow we knew we were together.

 
  • With this crazy life we have time for anything and there are things we can´t enjoy them.

  • With this crazy life we have time for anything and there are things we can´t enjoy them. (Not sure what you mean to say here, sentence is confusing)

 
  • Those things are smallers but the most important.

  • Those things are smallers may be small but are the most important.

 
  • Aforetime people were no so busy and they had time for doing simple things.

  • Aforetime In the past people were not so busy and they had time for doing simple things.

 
That was touching, thanks for sharing your feelings.
Butterfly
Sep 23rd 2010 05:33
"With this crazy life we have time for anything and there are things we can´t enjoy them"
I mean we haven´t time because we are so busy with job and with our daily life, to spend time with important things like to be with family and enjoy life.
yumi
Sep 23rd 2010 14:06
I didn't know that you lost your mom when you were 7 years old. I'm very sorry to hear that. Since my parents are alive, I can't imagine and share your feeling. However, I think that keeping smiling and spending happy life with your family are the best for your father.
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