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Apr 7, 2012 01:05
I want to write here again.
I have broken my computer and my husband lend me his personal computer.
My computer is broken a week ago.I hope it is fixed on Tuesday.
With this situation I could spend more time reading.
Jon
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Apr 7, 2012 02:12
  • I have broken my computer and my husband lend me his personal computer.

  • I have broken my computer and my husband lent (/loaned) me his personal computer.

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  • My computer is broken a week ago.

  • My computer was broken a week ago.

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Apr 7, 2012 18:50 Butterfly
Thank you Jon
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