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Oct 17, 2019 20:47 林逾静 made 8 corrections for 《秋日之游》
Oct 17, 2019 16:19 Joie made 11 corrections for 《秋日之游》
Oct 16, 2019 21:24 farmersheep made 3 corrections for <开心的秋游>
저는 천상병 시인의 작품<소풍>을 아주 좋아하거든요^^
Oct 16, 2019 15:19 radkimi made 4 corrections for <开心的秋游>
Oct 15, 2019 10:28 farmersheep made 6 corrections for 저의 오늘의 중국어 연습입니다.
原文在表意上没有问题,从母语的语感出发,稍微了改动一下。很久不见,您的中文进步很明显!
Oct 15, 2019 10:02 radkimi made 3 corrections for 저의 오늘의 중국어 연습입니다.
Oct 14, 2019 00:18 radkimi made 1 corrections for 열심히 무용연습을 하고 있습니다.
Oct 14, 2019 00:17 radkimi made 4 corrections for 前天我和一个朋友一起吃了晚饭。
Oct 13, 2019 15:00 flysky made 1 corrections for 열심히 무용연습을 하고 있습니다.
Oct 13, 2019 11:52 radkimi made 2 corrections for <回放恋爱>.
Oct 12, 2019 17:17 Naomi Lv made 3 corrections for 【充实的一天(闪电约会)】​
It's really a sweet day especially 비빔밥을 먹었다 with family members. I heard that 남산 is beautiful in the autumn and hope one day i can ...
Oct 12, 2019 00:40 radkimi made 1 corrections for <在首尔城墙内绿色交通区里限制五等级车运行/上路...
Oct 10, 2019 23:49 radkimi made 7 corrections for 《龟兔赛跑》
Oct 10, 2019 11:03 demoniac made 3 corrections for 今天中午,我和我先生两个人为了观看话剧坐地铁过了汉江。
今天白天,我和老公出去看话剧。我们坐地铁过汉江的时候,发现今天的天气格外好。因为昨天刚下过雨。于是,我拿出手机,随手拍了(一)个小视频。 这样更自然~
Oct 10, 2019 10:54 echo made 3 corrections for 今天中午,我和我先生两个人为了观看话剧坐地铁过了汉江。
Oct 8, 2019 15:05 radkimi made 5 corrections for 1-白钟元牌万能酱料制作方法。
저도 집밥 백선생을 보고 요리를 배우고 있습니다.
Oct 8, 2019 12:53 林逾静 made 2 corrections for 1-试用万能酱油做四种家常菜
Oct 8, 2019 12:48 林逾静 made 1 corrections for 1- 万能酱油的烹饪方法
万能酱油的调制方法/万能酱油的配方 对于酱料我们一般不说烹饪的
Oct 8, 2019 12:46 林逾静 made 4 corrections for 며칠전 우연히 도서실에서 책을 보았고,
Oct 8, 2019 12:25 林逾静 made 1 corrections for 雨天早晨 비오는 아침
我们说“小雨”更多,“细雨”可能在文学作品中更多。
Oct 5, 2019 15:42 林逾静 commented on 인라인( in-line skating )
我有一个问题想请教你一下: 처음 너를 볼 때부터 느꼈지初次见你便已感知 널 만지면 다칠 거란 걸若触碰你必会受伤 这里面的거란是什么用法,我查不到这个语法,有点苦恼 如果可以帮我解答的化,真的谢谢了!
Oct 5, 2019 15:40 林逾静 made 2 corrections for 【夜晚的滑直排轮滑】
我认为若是比较生活化的场合,用“觉得”就可以。 对了,我也喜欢玩轮滑哟!以前经常玩,但是最近没怎么玩。
Oct 5, 2019 15:31 林逾静 commented on 인라인( in-line skating )
直排轮滑,roller-skating是旱冰。
Oct 5, 2019 15:28 林逾静 made 2 corrections for 【夜晚散步-夜风与波斯菊】 【밤산책- 밤바람과 코스모스】
Oct 1, 2019 13:45 A CROWN made 3 corrections for 在看的过程中一直有兴致勃发的音乐剧~ ?
Sep 30, 2019 20:48 katymei made 6 corrections for 【“梵净山】刚才我偶然在网络上看到了这些视频。
Sep 30, 2019 20:29 katymei made 3 corrections for 你们(对这座山)听说过吗?
Sep 30, 2019 01:24 ty9599 made 8 corrections for [体育课]
Sep 29, 2019 14:05 Elena-Ellie made 1 corrections for 出来庭院的母鸡
Sep 29, 2019 14:02 katymei made 3 corrections for 【机场旅客站里的住宿信息】
Sep 29, 2019 09:34 radkimi made 2 corrections for [깜찍한 미니사과]
Sep 28, 2019 18:02 林逾静 made 2 corrections for 【豆芽汤饭和豆芽拌饭】
下次也吃得开心!
Sep 28, 2019 00:11 radkimi made 3 corrections for [拍画片游戏] ?
Sep 28, 2019 00:08 radkimi made 6 corrections for #1【在路边花坛里的花.】
Sep 27, 2019 09:30 Elena-Ellie made 1 corrections for 隔很久后才洗车
Sep 26, 2019 17:04 小黑 made 4 corrections for 今天的天气:下毛毛雨
Sep 22, 2019 23:34 radkimi made 1 corrections for 昨天,我去了一趟护国院。
Sep 22, 2019 21:15 katymei made 1 corrections for 大清早, 在毛毛细雨中,
Sep 22, 2019 21:14 katymei made 3 corrections for 大清早, 在毛毛细雨中,
Sep 21, 2019 01:47 森五 made 3 corrections for 昨天,我去牙科洗了牙。
😝️完美!
Sep 21, 2019 01:09 linlu made 2 corrections for 带着壮壮去经常走的散步道,짱아와 늘 걸었던 산책길.​​
希望你开心^^
Sep 19, 2019 22:22 katymei made 6 corrections for [快吃比赛 ][谁快吃]
這種比賽很傷健康喔⋯⋯
Sep 19, 2019 00:02 katymei made 2 corrections for 这部歌曲是,我很久很久以前看过的一部电影《(晩秋》的插...
這部電影是由下著雨的灰色西雅圖天空拉開序幕
Sep 18, 2019 22:27 苹果树上的绿鹿 made 5 corrections for 【唧唧咕咕】【두런두런】
Sep 18, 2019 22:11 苹果树上的绿鹿 made 2 corrections for 昨天,我去牙科洗了牙。
Sep 16, 2019 10:26 林逾静 made 3 corrections for 我昨天撑着雨伞在毛毛雨中散步了。
Sep 15, 2019 16:20 熊猫 made 4 corrections for 1那我们试着一起去散步吧。
Sep 15, 2019 14:05 made 14 corrections for 我昨天撑着雨伞在毛毛雨中散步了。
虽然看不了照片,但是那种雨后的惬意能够从你的文字感受到~
Sep 15, 2019 13:37 made 2 corrections for 北汉山