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In a convenience store in Japan you can find many sweet buns. One of them is a 'Mini Snack Gold' from Yamazaki Baking Co., Ltd which is the biggest Japanese company making bread and snack food. 'Mini Snack Gold' is a long seller product which has been selling more than 40 years since 1968.
Here are the images of 'Mini Snack Gold':
http://www.google.co.jp/search?q=%E3%83%9F%E3%83%8B%E3%82%B9%E3%83%8A%E3%83%83%E3%82%AF%E3%82%B4%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AB%E3%83%89&prmd=imvns&tbm=isch
A 'Mini Snack Gold' has a very confusing name because it is big, not mini. Its diameter is about 20 cm. It is larger than a child's face. It has 598 kcal, which is more than the calories of a BIG Mac, 556 kcal. I can't believe that 'Mini' is bigger than 'BIG'.
Today I have found a new product from Yamazaki. Its name is '小さな Mini Snack Gold' which means 'small Mini Snack Gold'. I felt dizzy. Yamazaki's naming scheme is chaotic. It is not small. It is a normal size of sweet bun whose diameter is about 12 cm and whose calories are 194 kcal.
Here are the images of 'Mini Snack Gold':
http://www.google.co.jp/search?q=%E3%83%9F%E3%83%8B%E3%82%B9%E3%83%8A%E3%83%83%E3%82%AF%E3%82%B4%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AB%E3%83%89&prmd=imvns&tbm=isch
A 'Mini Snack Gold' has a very confusing name because it is big, not mini. Its diameter is about 20 cm. It is larger than a child's face. It has 598 kcal, which is more than the calories of a BIG Mac, 556 kcal. I can't believe that 'Mini' is bigger than 'BIG'.
Today I have found a new product from Yamazaki. Its name is '小さな Mini Snack Gold' which means 'small Mini Snack Gold'. I felt dizzy. Yamazaki's naming scheme is chaotic. It is not small. It is a normal size of sweet bun whose diameter is about 12 cm and whose calories are 194 kcal.
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In a convenience store in Japan you can find many sweet buns. (This makes sense, but you may want to say "Many types of sweet buns")
One of them is a 'Mini Snack Gold' from Yamazaki Baking Co., Ltd which is the biggest Japanese bread and snack food company.
'Mini Snack Gold' is an old product which has been selling for more than 40 years. Since 1968. (Or "'M.S.G. has been sold for a long time, it has been selling for more than 40 years. Since 1968.")
It has 598 kcal, which is more than the calories of a BIG Mac, 556 kcal. (x_x!)
I felt dizzy. (hahaha)
It has 598 kcal, which is more than the calories of a BIG Mac, at 556 kcal.
I also don't get pastries from the convenience store a lot. I usually buy pastries from bakeries baking pastries in-store.
great!.
personally i'd call these 'pastries' instead of 'buns' because for me a bun is a compact round bread, about the size of a large fist.
'Mini Snack Gold' is a long selling product which has been sold for more than 40 years since 1968.
It has 598 kcal, which is more than the calories of a BIG Mac, which is 556 kcal.
Today I have found a new product from Yamazaki.
It is a normal sized sweet bun whose diameter is about 12 cm and whose calories are 194 kcal.
One of them is a called 'Mini Snack Gold' from Yamazaki Baking Co., Ltd (which is the biggest Japanese company making bread and snack food). Parentheses here make it seem more natural to me, since the entire second half of the sentence is just describing Yamazaki Baking Co., Ltd. By using parentheses you affix the entire content of the parenthetical statement to Yamazaki, etc.
'Mini Snack Gold' is a long-selling product which has been selling for more than 40 years (since 1968). Parenthesis are needed here. "Since 1968" is a clarification that some people might not need, so it's more passive to put it in parentheses.
A 'Mini Snack Gold' has a very confusing name because it is big, not mini.
Its diameter is about 20 cm. Very good! "Its" is one of those things that many Americans don't do properly, (it's/its confuses people), but you wrote it correctly. :)
It has 598 kcal, which is more than the calories of a BIG Mac; 556 kcal. Here's a nice place for a good-old semicolon.
I felt dizzy. Awesome. Your writing style is very amusing!
It is a normal-size of sweet bun whose diameter is about 12 cm and whose calories are 194 kcal. (OR It is a normally sized sweet bun... "Sized is a verb, so "normal" an adjective doesn't work with "sized." "Normally" is an ad-verb, which is an adjective that is used for verbs. :)
I probably said that wrong, but I meant to say "Interesting! Congratulations for having good English!
In a convenience stores in Japan you can find many sweet buns. (I don't think your sentence is wrong, but the way I wrote it clarifies that there are sweet buns in a lot of convenience stores, not just one. Just a suggestion, not a correction.)
One of them is a 'Mini Snack Gold' from Yamazaki Baking Co., Ltd, which is the biggest Japanese company that makes bread and snack food. (I agree with the other corrections, this is just an alternative.)
I wonder if the make any that don't have gluten in them xD I definitely want to try one if I go to Japan again!