Sorry, I'm very lonely.

  •  
  • 378
  • 2
  • 1
  • English 
Jul 29, 2015 17:35
Sorry, I'm very lonely.

If you are a woman, I love you.

Please marry me.

How many child do you want?

omg, do you want make 20 kids?

We must be so busy every day!

I need workout and get stamina....

Every day is hard than Olympic games....
Willow
Jul 30, 2015 05:36
  • Sorry, I'm very lonely.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • If you are a woman, I love you.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • Please marry me.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • How many child do you want?
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • omg, do you want make 20 kids?

  • Omg, do you want to have 20 kids?

 
  • We must be so busy every day!
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • I need workout and get stamina....

  • I need to workout and get some stamina....

 
  • Every day is hard than Olympic games....

  • Every day is harder than the Olympic games....

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Jul 30, 2015 07:10 Afternoon oolon tea
  • Thank you! :D

 
Jul 30, 2015 07:26 Willow
  • You're welcome! :)
x

Report this entry

Spam entry

Sorry, I'm very lonely. If you are a woman, I love you. Please marry me. How many child do you want? omg, do you want make 20 kids? We must be so busy every day! I need workout and get stamina.... Every day is hard than Olympic games....


Author

Afternoon oolon tea


Reporter

0

Close Send