MARIA's entry (19)
Watch Out!!
Pls. correct my English as follows;
I live 2nd floor of a small apartment in Zushi.
There is not elevator, and I had to down stairs t...
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Our Friendship
Pls. correct my English as follows;
My old friend, Miyuki, tell me this promotion video via facebook.
About 15 years ago, She and I ...
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Happy Surprise!!
Pls. correct my English as follows;
My best friend and brother are born in same day.
It was February 24.
Yes, today is their birthda...
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Franz Liszt ”Liebestraume – 3”
Pls. correct my English as follows;
After listening Daiki Ushida’s piano, I have started to practice of Franz Liszt "Liebestraume...
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How about you?
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When I study a foreign language, sometime it is so hard for me.
However, the other time, it is e...
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Pls. help me!
Recently I post at least one journal on my SNS everyday for the purpose of improving my English skills.
Today some foreign girl responde...
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Unbelievable Talent!!
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Tomoki Ushida, 12 years old boy, plays “Liszt Liebestraume No.3”.
He is the youngest pianist who ...
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My Valinetine's Day
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I gave a chocolate to my special last night.
He looked happy with a big smile, and said to me,
“...
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After 11 months later...
Pls. correct my English as follows,
Would you click on the link as bellow?
This is our spirit.
No matter what happen to us, we have ...
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How do you think of Japanese “GIRI-CHOCO”?
Pls. correct my English as follows;
For Japanese, St. Valentine’s Day is not only for the “Lovers” but also for the “Everyone”.
Of co...
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Full Score Evaluation
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My first class for Zushi citizen which was named the "Step Up for Microsoft Office Word 2010&...
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Gossip Girl season 3
I love to watch American Drama Programs by DVD.
It is one of my strong tools to improve my lannguage skill.
Now I am watching the "...
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After heavy raining
After heavy raining, the sky is very clear now.
I will see a lot of beautiful stars tonight.
It will be exciting!
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Computer Class for Zushi citizens
Please correct my poor English as follows;
My computer class for Zushi citizens will begin soon.
逗子市民のためのコンピューターのクラスが間もなく始まります。
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Draw a Deep Breath
Because of a drizzling rain, the air is very fresh today.
霧雨が降ったので、今日の空気はとても澄んでいます。
I draw deep a long breath, and feel comfortabl...
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My SNS
Recently I connected my Twitter account with LinkedIn. So I decided that I posted at least one tweet in English everyday. Although it is ...
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About my work
My main duty is teaching computer class for both in Japanese and English.
Today I will tell you how I can get this job.
When I was a co...
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Snow, Snow, Snow...
When I watched TV news last night, I was very surprised at heavy snowing in Tohoku Area. I had been in Akita for 6 years. I still have a ...
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Windy Day
I always go to the office by bicycle. However, it is tough work for me to pedal a bicycle in such a windy day. That's the reason why ...
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