My first error report

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Sep 25, 2012 18:34
Please correct my English in the following sentences.

This is my first error report made in English.
I really want you to correct it because of my duty.

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Title: Error Report about Moment feature


Hi Support Center,

Summary: Moments has not been working form September 22, 2012

STR(Step to reproduce)
9/22 9:00AM(*Japanese Time)-
Display the messeage "We didn't find any public influential moments for you."

9/22 9:00PM-
504 Gateway Time-out

9/23 9:00AM-
Display the messeage "We didn't find any public influential moments for you."
Push "Tweet" and "Share" buttons so as to reconnect networks.
Nothing is changing

9/24 6:00AM-
Display the messeage "We didn't find any public influential moments for you."

9/25 9:00AM
Display the messeage "We didn't find any public influential moments for you."
There are no Facebook records on Dashboard of September 24, 2012.

Result: Nothing has been changing since September 22, 2012

Expected: Please investigate this problem as a priority.

Regards,
Maria Abe