English Recommendation

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Jul 24, 2012 18:24
Please correct my English in the following sentences.

My friend asked me to write recommendation.
Actually I was her supervisor several years ago.
She was my secretary, and she always helped me a lots.
It is first time I write recommendation in English.
I would like to help her to get a new job. Do you think this recommendation is good?

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Keiko Sato had been working for XX as Group Secretary since April 1993 to March 1996. XX is the biggest advertising agency which clients are not only in Japan but also all over the world.

During her employment, Ms. Sato proved that she was highly responsible, reliable and capable of performing multiple tasks. She has excellent computer skills and works well with her co-workers. As a secretary, she assisted our duties perfectly every time we need.

It is because of these attributes that I strongly recommend Ms. Sato.