Goddness on the Lake

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Apr 9, 2012 01:59
Please correct my English in the following sentences.

Do you know who this beautiful lady is?
Her name is Tasuko. She is a just like goddess on the Tazawa Lake in Akita prefecture.
I had been in Akita for 6 years in my school days.
Until then, I would like to see her when I feel sorrow, pain, or worry about something.
When I see her, she always encourage me with a loving look on her face.