Mismatches between Lang-8 Users

Mismatches bBetween Lang-8 Users

There are lots of Laung-8 Uusers from different countries but I think there also are mismatches between the numbers of people who speak each lauguage language.

I think it's okay to use "users" instead of "Users" here because I would say it's not a proper noun. The second correction I think it's better to use "people who speak" instead of just numbers of each language because I think the mismatch is between the people who speak one native language and another group of people who speak another native language.

Lots of Asian people like me want to learn English and I personally feel personally these Asians are trying to help people whose mother tongue is English.

Too many Asians are trying to help because they too want some help from English users but the number of native English speakers are is relatively much fewer less than the number of Asians language native speakers.

I added "native" because I assume you are referring to people whose first language is English. Use "is" because it's referring to "the number". When comparing something, you can say "less than" or "more than". The last correction - I assume you are referring to people who speak an Asian language natively because some Asians also speak English as their native language, like me :)

pPlease correct my essay!!!

Too many Asians are trying to help because they too want some help from English users but the number of English speakers is relatively much fewer than the number of Asians.