made 1 corrections for Words a Judo athlete said
There were many moments for Japan where they were so close to getting a medal. It was a bit sad, but they all did their best.
commented on My naughty cat
Please be careful, lots of plants are poisonous for cats. Here is a list (in English, but with pictures also!): http://www.aspca.org/Pet-...
commented on Natural Expression
I think the second sentence sounds more natural, except we would say 'Something funny happened at school' rather than 'A funn...
Jun 14, 2012 06:17
made 2 corrections for My parcel
ひらがなだけで書くことは、わかりにくいようにさせてしまったと思います。
私の日本語が悪かったら許してくださいね。>_<
made 5 corrections for My daughter's growth
My mom used to take a bath with me until I was about 5 years old. After that I was too big to fit in the tub with her! (I'm tall!)
I...
made 4 corrections for I am growing Christmas rose.
The idea to grow a Christmas rose sounds wonderful! Good luck, and I hope it becomes a beautiful flower!
made 5 corrections for A gift from Japan
Interesting entry! It's surprising that it's almost been six months, now. I actually have been to a couple of Japanese events and...
made 11 corrections for The Japanese space probe Ha...
とても面白いポストをありがとうございます。
I knew about the Hayabusa, but I'm not sure if very many other foriegners will have known about it. The spac...
made 8 corrections for The tragic mountain climbing
大変ですね。すぐになおります様に!
僕も日本で小学生と一緒に山登りをしました。秋田県でしたので、鳥海山を登ったんです。とてもいい思い出ですが、初めて行った時にひどい日焼けしてしまいました。
シアトルの山はいつも、曇っていて、留学生を連れて行くと霧で何も見えないこ...
made 7 corrections for Glee and iCarly
I'm glad you and your daughter enjoy American TV. I really like Japanese TV. I watch it on テレビ小僧 everyday.
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made 6 corrections for Real summer
僕は秋田県の日本海の近いところに住んでいました。他の地域と比べるとより涼しいと言われてましたが、大変蒸し暑かったです。エアコンのない状態を想像するだけでマジで恐ろしいです。頑張ってください!!
I really hope that Japan can get back t...
娘が負けましたけど、その日は楽しそうでしたね。ランチをパックするときに何を作りますか?アメリカ人はsandwichを作ります。
Hope she gets better soon!
Winter is such a beautiful season.
There were many moments for Japan where they were so close to getting a medal. It was a bit sad, but they all did their best.
We do have fireflies where I live but we don't see them very often, either.
Please be careful, lots of plants are poisonous for cats. Here is a list (in English, but with pictures also!): http://www.aspca.org/Pet-...
あ~懐かしい!!切りたんぽ鍋はとても美味しいですよね! Great journal entry! I understood you perfectly (^_^).
both are OK.
I think the second sentence sounds more natural, except we would say 'Something funny happened at school' rather than 'A funn...
ひらがなだけで書くことは、わかりにくいようにさせてしまったと思います。 私の日本語が悪かったら許してくださいね。>_<
It's nice to hear that your cat is lively again. It must have been a very stressful time for you.
ほとんど良かった!ただある所にもっと自然な言い方に直してみました。質問があればぜひ:)
Wow, it looks like so much fun!
Well done, really good! That sounds like a fun trip, I hope you and your daughter have a good time!
It looks delicious! 美味しそうです☆
はじめまして! 母国語が英語じゃない人が添削してはだめでしょうか?
That's so beautiful! I'd love to visit that place.
I have never tried a pressure cooker. It sounds interesting.
I hope you stay warm.
I heard about the recent storm. A lot of people are writing about it so it seems bad!
You are lucky to have such a nice friend. :)
Is everything ok now?
とても良かった!I hope you're doing okay now :)
I don't remember having a bath with my mom when I was little. I had my own bath.
My mom used to take a bath with me until I was about 5 years old. After that I was too big to fit in the tub with her! (I'm tall!) I...
私の夫も大変な雪かきをしました。
The idea to grow a Christmas rose sounds wonderful! Good luck, and I hope it becomes a beautiful flower!
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That's a really pretty lake. I want to see changing leaves somewhere nice :D
ワンワン。
いいですね~。
nawww~ is that her? little Matcha is so kawaii~! :3
Interesting entry! It's surprising that it's almost been six months, now. I actually have been to a couple of Japanese events and...
I guess many mothers are relieved today. htp://pekepenguin.com/
You are right about animals talking .. It's the same as cars talking. http://pekepenguin.com/
Overall, nice post. Keep up the good work :)
There is no news on TV about it here anymore. http://pekepenguin.com/
I think I saw the same clip on TV. http://pekepenguin.com/
I hope your daughter's dream comes true. http://pekepenguin.com/
とても面白いポストをありがとうございます。 I knew about the Hayabusa, but I'm not sure if very many other foriegners will have known about it. The spac...
大変ですね。すぐになおります様に! 僕も日本で小学生と一緒に山登りをしました。秋田県でしたので、鳥海山を登ったんです。とてもいい思い出ですが、初めて行った時にひどい日焼けしてしまいました。 シアトルの山はいつも、曇っていて、留学生を連れて行くと霧で何も見えないこ...
Very nice English! It's great that you and your daughter get to share interests :D
All good things must come to an end. http://pekepenguin.com
I'm glad you and your daughter enjoy American TV. I really like Japanese TV. I watch it on テレビ小僧 everyday. http://www.youtube.com/...
僕は秋田県の日本海の近いところに住んでいました。他の地域と比べるとより涼しいと言われてましたが、大変蒸し暑かったです。エアコンのない状態を想像するだけでマジで恐ろしいです。頑張ってください!! I really hope that Japan can get back t...