thank you [고맙습니다]

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Nov 21st 2009 17:31
하나님, 내 인생에 모든것을 대한 고맙습니다..
God, Thank you for everything in my life.

is this sentence correct?

Also, I will probably be writing very short entries until I begin improving and can write much more. Thank you all for all teh corrections! :]