A Correction For Anothter Correction

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Mar 16, 2012 14:37
My friend leave a comment saying he wants to change people’s conservative ideas.
He added “I make people more aggressive.”

Even though I’m the same Korean as him, I would like to help him with his English. I’m thinking of leave these comments.

If you don’t mind, I’d like you to check this if there is mistake.

Victore: When it comes to discribing people to be aggressive, it would mean they would be more offensive to people’s opinion.

If I were in your shoes,
I would say “I should make people to be outgoing and open to new ideas and things.”

If I were you,
I would say I should help people to be extroverts and open to new ideas and things.
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