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Pat123
  • It tells you the time to stand up.
  • It tells you the time when to stand up.
It tells you the time when to stand up.

Jul 6, 2015 01:55 Public Started Using Apple Watch
Pat123
  • I can check simple messages quickly without using iPhone.
  • I can check simple messages quickly without using my/the iPhone.
I can check simple messages quickly without using my/the iPhone.

Jul 6, 2015 01:54 Public Started Using Apple Watch
Pat123
  • Finally Apple Watch was released in Singapore last Friday, and then I started using it from this Monday.
  • Finally, the Apple Watch was released in Singapore last Friday, and then I started using it from this Monday.
Finally, the Apple Watch was released in Singapore last Friday, and then I started using it from this Monday.

Jul 6, 2015 01:54 Public Started Using Apple Watch
Pat123
  • I wondered if it's really useful before buying it, but notification is useful.
  • I wondered if it would really be useful before buying it, but the notification feature is useful.
I wondered if it would really be useful before buying it, but the notification feature is useful.

Jul 6, 2015 01:54 Public Started Using Apple Watch
Pat123
  • And we are looking for volunteer translator.
  • Also, we are looking for volunteer translators.
  • Since this is something different, "Also" is better.
Since this is something different, "Also" is better.
Mecheon
  • I like to drink a isotonic drink after jogging.
  • I like to have a sports drink after jogging.
  • "An isotonic drink" isn't wrong, but it's more commonly called a "sports drink".
"An isotonic drink" isn't wrong, but it's more commonly called a "sports drink".

Apr 12, 2015 00:52 Public Jogging in the Campus
Mecheon
  • Luckily my house is near an university.
  • Luckily my house is near a university.

Apr 12, 2015 00:52 Public Jogging in the Campus
Mecheon
  • It's very nice to jog in the campus.
  • It's very nice to jog on the campus.
  • Or "... jog through the campus."
Or "... jog through the campus."

Apr 12, 2015 00:52 Public Jogging in the Campus
Chishio8
  • My second book of this year was Stephen Hawking's "A Briefer History of Time".
  • My second book of this year was Stephen Hawking's "A Briefer History of Time."
  • If the sentence ends with ( " ) then the period goes before the last ( " )

Apr 11, 2015 02:26 Public The Second Book of This Year
Chishio8
  • This book reminded my days I studied astrophysics in grad school.
  • This book reminded me of my days when I studied astrophysics in grad school.

Apr 11, 2015 02:25 Public The Second Book of This Year

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