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Jan 23, 2011 01:53
I went to a movie theater to see "Social Network". I wanted to see from 19:50, but the theater was full at that moment. Therefore, I bought a ticket from 21:50.

I was interested in this movie because I use facebook every day. In addition, I'm considering starting company in the future.

This movie was exciting for me. I had a feeling that I wanted to write program for great service like Mark Zuckerberg. :D
katie23
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 23, 2011 01:56
  • I wanted to see from 19:50, but the theater was full at that moment.

  • I wanted to see from 19:50, but the theater was full at that time.

 
  • In addition, I'm considering starting company in the future.

  • In addition, I'm considering starting a company in the future.

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  • This movie was exciting for me.

  • The movie was exciting for me.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I had a feeling that I wanted to write program for great service like Mark Zuckerberg.

  • I had a feeling that I wanted to write a program for a great service, like Mark Zuckerberg.

1 people think this correction is good.  
Pat123
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 23, 2011 02:46
  • I wanted to see from 19:50, but the theater was full at that moment.

  • I wanted to see it at from 19:50, but the theater was full (at that moment).

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  • Therefore, I bought a ticket from 21:50.

  • Therefore, I bought a ticket from for 21:50.

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