My grandfather

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Jan 23, 2012 09:52
Good morning dear friends! (*^-^)

My grandfather is living in Taiwan. He is 86 years old.
Both his legs are not good, so he cannot walk well.
When he wants to go out, he needs a helper.
Probably because he got old, sometimes he forgets his old memories.
I go visit him only once a year.
I am afraid that he will forget me, but he always remembers me.
I'm very glad.
I love my grandfather.
I will be praying for his health and longevity.

Thank you very much for reading this.
I hope you have a great day. ♪*:･'(*⌒―⌒*)))
Jamie
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 24, 2012 08:21
  • his age is 86 years old.

  • He age is 86 years old.

 
  • His both legs are not good, so he cannot walk along.

  • Both his legs are not good, so he cannot walk well.

 
  • When he want to go out , he need a helper.

  • When he wants to go out, he needs a helper.

 
  • Probably because he got old,　sometimes, he was forgot his old memory.

  • Probably because he got old, sometimes he forgets his old memories.

 
  • I am go to visit him only once at a year.

  • I am go to visit him only once at a year.

 
  • I afraid he will forget me, but he always remembers me.

  • I am afraid that he will forget me, but he always remembers me.

 
  • I 'm very glad.

  • I'm very glad.

 
  • I would be praying for his health and longevity.

  • I will be praying for his health and longevity.

 

Very well done! I am not very close to my only grandfather, but I am glad you love your grandfather! I hope you will learn many good things from him! Elders are very wise! (^-^)

Jan 24, 2012 08:56 ｓｈｕ
Hi! Jamie!^^

When my sentence corrects nobody, I am slightly lonely.
Probably my sentence was too poor.

Thank you very much for correction.
I can learn a lot from you.
Thank you! Jamie!
Have a nice day!♪*:･'(*⌒―⌒*)))

shu

Jan 24, 2012 11:12 Jamie
You are very welcome, Shu! You're sentences are not poor at all! You are learning a difficult language, so mistakes are okay!

Jan 24, 2012 21:18 ｓｈｕ
Thank you! Jamie!
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Feb 8, 2012 19:53

He is 86 years old.

Both his legs are not good, so he cannot walk well.

When he wants to go out, he needs a helper.

Probably because he got old, sometimes he forgets his old memories.

I go visit him only once a year.

I am afraid that he will forget me, but he always remembers me.

I will be praying for his health and longevity.

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