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Could you please correct my essay?

I have a writing assignment and I would like you to correct the conclusion. If there are better ways to write, please let me know! ...
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Dec 5, 2011 23:01
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please correct my essay introduction!

I have been writing an essay, and this is the introduction. Could you please correct it, and if there are better ways to wirte, let me ...
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Dec 4, 2011 00:44
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Please help me!! (The last body paragraph)

could you please correct my body paragraph? If there is a better way to write, please let me know! This is the last body paragraph. ...
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Dec 3, 2011 10:36
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2nd body paragraph

I have a writing assignment, and I would like you to correct it. This paragraph is very long, so I really appreciate even one correctio...
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Dec 3, 2011 10:33
Abby

I need your help!! ( first body paragraph)

Hi everyone, I need your help with my paper. This is a very long essay, so I really appreciate if you correct even ONE mistake. Th...
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Dec 3, 2011 10:28