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Last night, I made a cheese cake for my friends.
This was my second time to making cake, *The sentence is a bit too short, so adding a coma would be good.*
so it will be better than the first one.
Thank you!!! But I have a question.
I always said....It was my secound time to ''do'' something.....
Is this not correct?
Do I have to say
This is my secound time to ''doing'' something???