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I have a writing assignment and I would like you to correct the conclusion.
If there are better ways to write, please let me know!
Speaking has a big power to change our thoughts. Depending on how you vocalize, you might be able to obtain a well paid job, or you might be judged wrongly by other people. It is a good chance to think how you speak while you have a vocal conversation with your family, friends, colleagues, or boss. How or what you speak can be changeable with your little consideration. Your life might be able to be altered completely by the new way of speaking.
Thank you so much in advance=)
If there are better ways to write, please let me know!
Speaking has a big power to change our thoughts. Depending on how you vocalize, you might be able to obtain a well paid job, or you might be judged wrongly by other people. It is a good chance to think how you speak while you have a vocal conversation with your family, friends, colleagues, or boss. How or what you speak can be changeable with your little consideration. Your life might be able to be altered completely by the new way of speaking.
Thank you so much in advance=)
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Depending on how you vocalize, you might be able to obtain a well paid job or you might could be judged wrongly by other people.
It is a good chance idea to think about how you speak while you are having a vocal conversation with your family, friends, colleagues, or boss.
How or what you speak say can be changeable changed with your a little consideration.
Your life might could be able to be altered completely by the a new way of speaking.