Help me with my introduction
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Hello everyone, I rewrote some parts of my interoduction.
Could you correct it please?
The U.S. is often called a melting pot because people from different races, countries, or social classes come and live together.
As a familiar place, college is a good example.
There are native English speakers, who live in only English environments, immigrants, who fluently speak in bilingualism, and International students, who temporarily stay for education, like myself.
Thoes people sit side by side, and utilize English to communicate with others in class.
However, one step out of school, you can see people sepaking in different languages, and advertisments, signboards of restaurants, or warnings in transportation are written in a variety of languages.
If people comprehend more than a language in this country, it would be a convinient arm and prfit.
Therefore, I believe, learning another language in this country would positively influence every student.
Colleges and universities should require foreign language study for admission or graduation.
Could you correct it please?
The U.S. is often called a melting pot because people from different races, countries, or social classes come and live together.
As a familiar place, college is a good example.
There are native English speakers, who live in only English environments, immigrants, who fluently speak in bilingualism, and International students, who temporarily stay for education, like myself.
Thoes people sit side by side, and utilize English to communicate with others in class.
However, one step out of school, you can see people sepaking in different languages, and advertisments, signboards of restaurants, or warnings in transportation are written in a variety of languages.
If people comprehend more than a language in this country, it would be a convinient arm and prfit.
Therefore, I believe, learning another language in this country would positively influence every student.
Colleges and universities should require foreign language study for admission or graduation.
