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please please please!!

I had a writing assignment, and need your help. Could you please correct my essay? These days, people attend college for many reas...
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Apr 19, 2012 04:19
Abby

Could you please correct my essay?

Hi everyone, I have a writing assignment, and I need you help!! Please correct my essey. even one correction is appreciated. Thank you ...
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Apr 18, 2012 19:08
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a paper about male reproductive system of dog

Hello everyone, I am studying in a vet tech program, and had a paper about male reproductive system of dog. Could you please correct it...
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Jan 16, 2012 01:23
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the reason I chose the vet tech program

Hello everyone, I need a favor for my paper. Could you please correct it? If there are better vocab, please tell me! Thank you in ad...
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Jan 9, 2012 02:19
Abby

Could you please correct my essay?

I have a writing assignment and I would like you to correct the conclusion. If there are better ways to write, please let me know! ...
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Dec 5, 2011 23:01
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please correct my essay introduction!

I have been writing an essay, and this is the introduction. Could you please correct it, and if there are better ways to wirte, let me ...
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Dec 4, 2011 00:44
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Please help me!! (The last body paragraph)

could you please correct my body paragraph? If there is a better way to write, please let me know! This is the last body paragraph. ...
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Dec 3, 2011 10:36
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2nd body paragraph

I have a writing assignment, and I would like you to correct it. This paragraph is very long, so I really appreciate even one correctio...
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Dec 3, 2011 10:33
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I need your help!! ( first body paragraph)

Hi everyone, I need your help with my paper. This is a very long essay, so I really appreciate if you correct even ONE mistake. Th...
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Dec 3, 2011 10:28
Abby

I need your help with my homework.

I had an writing assignment and I would like you to correct my paragrah. The topic is "Are humans more depended on gestures o...
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Nov 4, 2011 19:18
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Please help meeeee

I am reading one of Helen Keller's articles but I do understand the last paragraphs. Could you please explain it roughly in Englis...
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Oct 31, 2011 12:51
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another question

I do not understand why advocates think that supression of a word or concept will make the problem disappear? Could you please read th...
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Oct 14, 2011 16:06
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I have a question.

I have English homework and I need to write down every important points in the article, The Word Police. This paragraph's point is...
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Oct 14, 2011 15:52
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I need help with my homework

I need to summarize an article. Could you please correct it? Thank you so much in advance! The author, Barbara Wallraff clari...
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Oct 12, 2011 17:07
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another body paragraph

I rewrote another body paragraph. Could you please correct it? Requiring a third language would be helpful for a international s...
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Oct 12, 2011 12:25
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a body paragraph

I retwote my body paragraph. Could you please correct it? This is very long, so even you correct a mistake, I appreciate. It is a go...
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Oct 12, 2011 12:11
Abby

Help me with my introduction

Hello everyone, I rewrote some parts of my interoduction. Could you correct it please? The U.S. is often called a melting pot becaus...
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Oct 12, 2011 12:03
Abby

Could you please help me with my essay???

I had a writing assignment. the topic is that wheather we should require foreign language for admission or graduation at college in the U...
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Oct 4, 2011 17:53
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another body paragraph

Hello everyone, I just finished another body paragraph. Could you please correct it? Thank you so much in advance! It is the ...
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Oct 4, 2011 16:11
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I need your help with my essay=)

Hello everyone, I had an writing assignment, and the topic is that whether we should require a foreign language for admission or graduati...
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Oct 4, 2011 05:15