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I can hear
my cat stepping down
the stairs slowly
one by one
ton,ton,ton.
my cat stepping down
the stairs slowly
one by one
ton,ton,ton.
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I have no corrections.
Some better words you could consider for "stepping" to also show that it was slow would be:
"my cat inching down"
"my cat creeping down"
I prefer "my cat creeping down"
There are some lists here: http://www.writtensound.com
I prefer "pat,pat, pat" beause its onomatipoeia is a bright and light sound and it is similar to the sound of French onomatopoeia "poc,poc,poc".