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Feb 18th 2010 11:10
The eternity is

in the minimum

like an atom

and also in the maximum

like an universe
urie-chan714
Feb 18th 2010 20:33
  • The eternity is

  • The Eternity is

 
  • like an universe

  • like an the universe

 
Aizu(会津）
Feb 18th 2010 21:59
Thank you, urie
I'll change it.

Eternity is

in the minimum

like an atom

and also in the maximum

like the universe
urie-chan714
Feb 18th 2010 22:02
No problem.. :D
Any revisement?


>>urie_
Peter
Feb 19th 2010 08:53
  • The eternity is

  • Eternity is

 
  • in the minimum

  • at its minimum

 
  • and also in the maximum

  • and at its maximum

 
  • like an universe

  • like the universe ["The" because there is only one universe (that we know of.)]

 
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