Please make my English more natural and concise !

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Aug 3, 2012 07:53
相馬野馬追い

したたる汗
馬のいななき
舞い上がる砂塵
相馬野馬追い
夏が来た



Soma nomaoi

Dripping sweats
Horses' neighs
Clouds of sands
Soma nomaoi
Summer has come!

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