Please make my English more natural and concise !

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Aug 3, 2012 07:53
相馬野馬追い

したたる汗
馬のいななき
舞い上がる砂塵
相馬野馬追い
夏が来た



Soma nomaoi

Dripping sweats
Horses' neighs
Clouds of sands
Soma nomaoi
Summer has come!

Andy アンデイ
Aug 8, 2012 16:40

good translation since their is poetical consideration involved.

Aug 14, 2012 10:22 Aizu(会津）
Thanks,Andy !
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相馬野馬追い したたる汗 馬のいななき 舞い上がる砂塵 相馬野馬追い 夏が来た Soma nomaoi Dripping sweats Horses' neighs Clouds of sands Soma nomaoi Summer has come!


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