Please make my English of ( ) more natural.
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Please would you make my English of ( ) more natural?
However, honestly speaking, I don't know whether the
trace of cesium is my enemy or not. Some experts say
that it may be good for the health as long as it's just
a trace. Others say it is very dangerous. I don't know
which is true. Strictly speaking, even experts don't
know the truth. In the future，we'll be able to see what
effect cesium will have, good or bad. But I want to know
now whether or not I will contract cancer.
This is the common,
latent anxiety
among lots of residents
living near the Fukushima
Atomic Power Plant.
( However I can't know my future now.
God knows it. But if he doesn't exist ,
no one can know it in the universe.
A trace of cesium
exists silently
without any smell
without any taste
in my dark cells. )
However, honestly speaking, I don't know whether the
trace of cesium is my enemy or not. Some experts say
that it may be good for the health as long as it's just
a trace. Others say it is very dangerous. I don't know
which is true. Strictly speaking, even experts don't
know the truth. In the future，we'll be able to see what
effect cesium will have, good or bad. But I want to know
now whether or not I will contract cancer.
This is the common,
latent anxiety
among lots of residents
living near the Fukushima
Atomic Power Plant.
( However I can't know my future now.
God knows it. But if he doesn't exist ,
no one can know it in the universe.
A trace of cesium
exists silently
without any smell
without any taste
in my dark cells. )
weird
I wouldn't worry about it so much. Radiation is far less deadly than the actual physical destruction wrought by tsunamis and earthquakes.
There are too many carcinogens to count to bother letting it make you anxious, any immediate threat world governments will suppress immediately.
Please make the English sentences in parentheses/brackets more natural.
Would you please tell me how I can make the sentences in parentheses/brackets below sound more natural?
( However I can't know my future now.
If there is a god, he (or she!^^) knows what my future holds.
But if there is no god,
then there is no one in the universe that knows.